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Ka Seven

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: World Of Sin

    This was an interesting poem. It captured me and kept me. very good... The only thing is that when you use enjambment, the subject matter after the period needs to ...

    Feb 10, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: A Moment of Healing

    It had appeal. It's very unique. and I think what captured me is the title fit so well. A moment of healing is all healing ever is. And the "I ...

    Feb 8, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: First Time

    Very subtle. I like how you don't come right out and say what you're talking about, but it shows through the feelings you portray in the words and almost frantic ...

    Feb 8, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: U.N.I.T 12

    There were quite a few grammatical errors. "off" is spelled as such, you spelled it "of." You should go read through it, because you missed some "S's" that are needed ...

    Feb 8, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: When Humanity Is No Longer Humane.

    This Poem has an impressive rhyme scheme and was well formatted. The only thing that I would like to add is that it was very blunt which is good in ...

    Feb 8, 2008
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: A bad person

    I quite liked it. Although it was the same old "dark style" if you will, it was done in a different way. Very to the point in the beginning but ...

    Feb 8, 2008
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: I am Legend

    I loved the book! Way different than the movie. Which is great, because I watched the movie first. And it didn't ruin anything about the book! :D And the ending ...

    Feb 8, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I'm not seducing you but...

    Poetry is unlike stories and other forms of writing in the way it has a good amount of noticeable flow. Of course the guidelines on this are loose. So your ...

    Jan 30, 2008


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